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Post by miskantle on Apr 16, 2006 1:19:42 GMT -5
alright hello everyone, alright im new, but i would really like some feedback and oppinions and alot of help. im curently working on a Detective Conan doujinshi and would really like the help. this work is really tentitive and i dont plan to go far with it unless there is atleast some people interested in the plot. anywho i was hopeing to post the first half her, including the cover of the Prologue cover and the first page in there rough draft form. hopefuly in the thexed day or too i should get the rough draft of page two and three up aswell. I would appresheate feedback on anything you can think off. art, plot, diologe, exetera...just please be kind, i dont think my fragel ego could take a harsh word right now Prolodue CoverPage 1Page 2Page 3thank you so much for your time and i hope you enjoy, i really do. ~Misk |
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Post by Chugoku-jinko on Apr 16, 2006 2:50:18 GMT -5
Sorry! I can't see the cover and the 1st page! ;-; can you repost them or something? or maybe something is wrong with your hosting site?
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Post by miskantle on Apr 16, 2006 11:55:26 GMT -5
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Post by *~NiCkY~* on Apr 16, 2006 15:58:00 GMT -5
wow
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Post by Chugoku-jinko on Apr 16, 2006 20:04:56 GMT -5
so far I can only see page 1 on the forum!  I think I'll read your doujinshi from DA instead! =3 *watches you*  |
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Post by miskantle on Apr 16, 2006 21:22:46 GMT -5
thank you both very much. i am trying to get as much of the rough draft of the pologe up as soon as posable. the thing is i need alitle help and direction. if there is anyone who os other really interested or really good with fanfiction and wants to help out please let me know, i could use the help moving from point a to b.
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Post by Chugoku-jinko on Apr 16, 2006 22:19:51 GMT -5
thank you both very much. i am trying to get as much of the rough draft of the pologe up as soon as posable. the thing is i need alitle help and direction. if there is anyone who os other really interested or really good with fanfiction and wants to help out please let me know, i could use the help moving from point a to b. oh I like to help! never really tried making a fanfiction but I could be some help!  |
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Post by miskantle on Apr 17, 2006 1:50:50 GMT -5
thank you so much. once i finish up the prologe i garante ill be getting intouch with you about some help. you just have to promis to keep it hush hush untill i get the story up. ^_^ in anycase here is the second page in rough draft form. i have to warn you, its alitle violent and...well...just read. im already working on page thee and digitaly coloring and editing page 1. once again i would love the feedback, as always www.deviantart.com/deviation/31950880/also i probably should mention that the intier story was inspierd by a song by James Blunt "your beautiful" and the pittiful music video i created to go with it. |
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Ayami-chan
Little Detective
Lonely Butterfly
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Post by Ayami-chan on Apr 17, 2006 7:23:57 GMT -5
Oh my god, that's so sad!! ;______;
But your drawing skill is fantastic! I don't know what to say... I'm really speachless! That's so... wow! Simply UnBeLiEvAbLe!!!
Please go on soon, can't wait!
Ayami-chan <3
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Post by shirafor on Apr 17, 2006 18:44:11 GMT -5
I'd hate to copy another person, but wow. I'm not very familiar with the drawing style, but it is spectacular! Very, very nice! I wanted to make a doujinshi (still do), but I can't draw  . So live my dream for me, and keep drawing! I wanna see more! And is that really the rough draft for you? Because it looks good enough to be the final copy! |
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Post by Chugoku-jinko on Apr 17, 2006 19:57:06 GMT -5
I'd hate to copy another person, but wow. I'm not very familiar with the drawing style, but it is spectacular! Very, very nice! I wanted to make a doujinshi (still do), but I can't draw . So live my dream for me, and keep drawing! I wanna see more! And is that really the rough draft for you? Because it looks good enough to be the final copy! agree with you, his drawing style is very original compared to the other drawing styles I've seen before. miskantle: okay I promise to keep quiet about it.  |
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Post by miskantle on Apr 18, 2006 13:44:19 GMT -5
I'd hate to copy another person, but wow. I'm not very familiar with the drawing style, but it is spectacular! Very, very nice! I wanted to make a doujinshi (still do), but I can't draw . So live my dream for me, and keep drawing! I wanna see more! And is that really the rough draft for you? Because it looks good enough to be the final copy! thank you very much. i've been actuly hopeing to figure out how to color and digitaly work with them to make them alitle more presentable. kind of in the same or simaler style to an artist called bleedman, though i could never compare to his work, its just....*drooles* in anycase ive been thinking about making the first post a list of the pages and books with there equivalint links and just posting now and then to say that theres been an update. that way no one hase to go digging through the posts to find each page of the do doujinshi, but i would like to hear everyone elses thoughts on it. |
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Post by miskantle on Apr 20, 2006 18:29:43 GMT -5
ok everyone, heres the scoop, ive started a tentitive webwight for the comic so that axsessing the ppages will be far more easy then simply skiming though the thread for updates. however, i will maintain this thread and update it with roughdrafts and ideas because i still want your opinions and help. here is the page... www.geocities.com/detectiveconandoujinshi/ |
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Post by Chugoku-jinko on Apr 21, 2006 1:44:04 GMT -5
ohh nice background! I think you need to make a main page than, on the side or the top have a menu, but youshould do that after you put upt he rest of the pages 1st! |
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Post by miskantle on Apr 21, 2006 15:33:57 GMT -5
ohh nice background! I think you need to make a main page than, on the side or the top have a menu, but youshould do that after you put upt he rest of the pages 1st! yha, final exams have been slowing me down |
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I think I'll read your doujinshi from DA instead! =3 *watches you* 
. So live my dream for me, and keep drawing! I wanna see more!
