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Post by miskantle on Apr 21, 2006 19:33:50 GMT -5
hay everyone. alright, i finaly did it, i finished page one compleatly, colard and all. there are some points i think i would like to go back and fix at some fuchure date, but for now that will have to do. please tell we what you thing should i keep coloring them or leave them as sketches page 1 finished : www.geocities.com/detectiveconandoujinshi/prolouge1.jpg
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Post by shirafor on Apr 21, 2006 20:55:41 GMT -5
*compares the first page, rough draft, with the new first page*
...yeah. The color does it justice.
It looks amazing. My mind is collapsing on itself and refusing to allow any other comments. It just looks really, really good. Now I definitely want to see more. Just.... wow, it looks great with color.
Personally, though, I'd say that if you do any more with color, you should have both the sketch and the colored one available for viewing. There are subtle differences (ok, so it's not so subtle) between the two styles, and they both have up sides that are appealing.
Just as that first page became colored, I too have become colored: green with envy that is...
...yeah, I really wish I had your artistic ability...
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Post by miskantle on Apr 22, 2006 3:39:41 GMT -5
*compares the first page, rough draft, with the new first page* ...yeah. The color does it justice. It looks amazing. My mind is collapsing on itself and refusing to allow any other comments. It just looks really, really good. Now I definitely want to see more. Just.... wow, it looks great with color. Personally, though, I'd say that if you do any more with color, you should have both the sketch and the colored one available for viewing. There are subtle differences (ok, so it's not so subtle) between the two styles, and they both have up sides that are appealing. Just as that first page became colored, I too have become colored: green with envy that is... ...yeah, I really wish I had your artistic ability... *blushes* im really flatterd, and im glad you like it, mabe i can make the rough draft vershions avalable on this thread in adition to the links to the finished works and as for your second coment im sure your much better them you beleave. i have almost three years on you and i can garentee you three years ago i was still drawing anime stick figures. i think i just have too much time on my hands to goofe around *laughs ocwardly*
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Post by shirafor on Apr 22, 2006 13:02:41 GMT -5
and as for your second coment im sure your much better them you beleave. i have almost three years on you and i can garentee you three years ago i was still drawing anime stick figures. i think i just have too much time on my hands to goofe around *laughs ocwardly* Really? In three years, you went from stick figures to this? Then there's still hope for me! Excuse me, but I'm going to run off and find paper and a pencil and start practicing. ;D
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Post by Chugoku-jinko on Apr 22, 2006 15:50:19 GMT -5
hay everyone. alright, i finaly did it, i finished page one compleatly, colard and all. there are some points i think i would like to go back and fix at some fuchure date, but for now that will have to do. please tell we what you thing should i keep coloring them or leave them as sketches page 1 finished : www.geocities.com/detectiveconandoujinshi/prolouge1.jpg ohhh!! nice! I like it, maybe you should try have it in actual manga style, in black and white and screentones and all the good other stuff. but that will take too long already! XD I guess you could kinda do all those stuff with a pencil! ;D oh! I want to ask you something. what are those kanji next to the gun. and what does it say?
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taipan
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Post by taipan on Apr 22, 2006 15:57:48 GMT -5
First, I was a bit surprised because of the drawing, but now I'm very curious how the story goes on and I like your style, too. The colours are great, a good mix and the colours fits togehter.
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Post by miskantle on Apr 22, 2006 18:27:39 GMT -5
hay everyone. alright, i finaly did it, i finished page one compleatly, colard and all. there are some points i think i would like to go back and fix at some fuchure date, but for now that will have to do. please tell we what you thing should i keep coloring them or leave them as sketches page 1 finished : www.geocities.com/detectiveconandoujinshi/prolouge1.jpg ohhh!! nice! I like it, maybe you should try have it in actual manga style, in black and white and screentones and all the good other stuff. but that will take too long already! XD I guess you could kinda do all those stuff with a pencil! ;D oh! I want to ask you something. what are those kanji next to the gun. and what does it say? the charecters are just a wird choice on my part. simply stated they simply say "bang" originaly i had it writen in english but it just dident 'feel right' so i played around with it and finaly decided that it sat better with me like that. as for the toens, i did try them at first, and all things considerd they would be far easer, but they dident quite fit with the style. as much as i love the art of DC, theres a part of me that just cant stand to coppy someone elses work, so i take the charicters and subject them alitle to my own styl which is a butched combination of traditional amarican and japanes animation
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nayung
New Detective
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Post by nayung on Apr 23, 2006 10:33:22 GMT -5
cool work ! *o* you've got an original style, quite different from DC fanart i usually see and i like it. poses and expressions are great and you've done a nice coloring job. /is curious about the story... ^^'
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Post by miskantle on Apr 28, 2006 12:34:35 GMT -5
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Post by rikuchan on Apr 28, 2006 15:46:37 GMT -5
wow it looks even better when u color it!! ^____^ keep going haha.. gotta know who shot the poor Ran.. XD
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Post by Chugoku-jinko on Apr 28, 2006 19:37:34 GMT -5
oohhh nice coloring, I really like the coloring for hte blood too! XD but for some odd reason what shinichi said doesn't really seem what he would say for real, but oh well it's you're plot! =3 you're the one who wanted to be original when you draw the DC charaters so, I'll let you keep it that way! =3
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Post by miskantle on May 1, 2006 1:29:56 GMT -5
alright everyone, i need to get some oppinions. the way i see it there are two options inorder i can persue. im not sure how many (if any) people are folowing this doujinshi, but if anyone is im now giving you two options and i want to hear from you. i can ither continue by trying to fuilly color and prepare all pages of this comic to there fulist extent before posting OR incase anyone is more interestind in plot over art i can continue to post the rough draft vershions and update them as i compleat them. on the one hand you may not get the full quolity I intend but you will get the story to you faster ...
i want to hear from you so please ither pm me or post
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Post by rikuchan on May 2, 2006 23:09:20 GMT -5
well it's good if u do take your time.. at least we will know what's going on in the story.. but.. it depends on if ure planning on coloring all the pages.. but if u just leave the rest black n white.. im sure we can make it out... like all comics XD
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Post by shirafor on May 3, 2006 19:31:10 GMT -5
Urgh, my life busy-ed up like 20x in the last week...
I'd prefer to get the story quickly. I actually like the pictures in the rough draft too, so that's my opinion.
Sorry the post is quick, but I need to make this fast.
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Post by Chugoku-jinko on May 3, 2006 19:42:39 GMT -5
I think I reather have the rough draft of it then color! =3 but it's mainly your choice since it's your time for doing this! =3
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