Post by Philip on Jun 6, 2006 23:03:08 GMT -5
Halt! Before you start reading remember, this fanfiction is PG. There is little violence, and damn is said a few times.
Characters
Shinichi Kudou
Ran Mouri
Kogorou Mouri
Eri Kisaki
Sonoko Suzuki
Ai Haibara
Vermouth
Mysterious Girl
Possibly Black Organization (I wouldn't want to spoil the fanfiction by not listing it eh?)
Possible Characters
Kaito Kid
Heiji Hattori
Kazuha Toyama
Shounen Tantei
Some of the for sure characters will definately only have a brief appearance. If the possible characters are in this story they will have major roles.
An uneasy darkness had settled over Japan for the night, Shinichi was just getting to bed, the phone rang.
"Hello Shinichi, it's been a long time. I really miss you and hope you will come back to me.", said a strange voice.
He knew he had heard this girl before but could not grasp her name from the back of his mind. Shinichi remembered back three years ago, the accident, that's right! The girl was the same one who had lost her life in the burning mansion.
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Three years previous
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There was an uneasy darkness over Japan, it was only six at night,
“Why is it dark this early?”, thought Ran.
She was just outside hanging the laundry because her father ruined the dryer by leaving a cigarette sitting on it.
“Father is so careless, I don’t know what that miserable old man would do without me acting as his maid for all of these years.”, muttered Ran.
She kept thinking about her friend of fifteen years, Shinichi Kudou. She really missed his smile and his encouraging actions hidden behind those harsh comments.
Ran yelled at her dad, “Do you know when Shinichi will be done with that big case over in Berlin? He has been gone so long and this is not like him.”
She had heard no response from her dad and decided to go check on him.
“Damn! Look at this mess. Father where are you?”
There was no reply.
“Father!”
There was a loud thud from the back of the house. Ran ran to the noise and saw her father who had been hit over the head with a bottle of Gin. There was also a silver knife sticking out of Kogorou’s shirt pocket.
Ran jumps out through the window and chases down the person who attempted to murder her father.
"Huff, huff.", Ran breathes while slowing down.
"Damnit! I lost him! Shinichi would be angry if he found out", Ran's stomache churns
"Shinichi, that's right, he hasn't called in a very long time."
Ran walks back to her house and realises a small brief case on the couch. She opens it up and finds three small pills. Poison, Antidote, and Memory are listed on little cards above the pills.
"Wow, what does this have to do with anything?", Ran says while shuffling through the brief case.
She stumbles upon a two papers with identification pictures.
"Miyana, Shiho and Kudou, Shini....", Ran pauses as she reads the name.
She leaves the house to head over to Shinichi's house with no clue what his name and picture were doing in the brief case.
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Does Ran know that Shinichi was shrunken or does she just find his name in the brief case strange? Why did Ran stop as she lost her breath? Did she really stop out of free will?
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Sorry to leave you all hanging but I am tired, I'll type up some more later
(This is my first fanfiction so it would be good to hear some comments.)
Characters
Shinichi Kudou
Ran Mouri
Kogorou Mouri
Eri Kisaki
Sonoko Suzuki
Ai Haibara
Vermouth
Mysterious Girl
Possibly Black Organization (I wouldn't want to spoil the fanfiction by not listing it eh?)
Possible Characters
Kaito Kid
Heiji Hattori
Kazuha Toyama
Shounen Tantei
Some of the for sure characters will definately only have a brief appearance. If the possible characters are in this story they will have major roles.
An uneasy darkness had settled over Japan for the night, Shinichi was just getting to bed, the phone rang.
"Hello Shinichi, it's been a long time. I really miss you and hope you will come back to me.", said a strange voice.
He knew he had heard this girl before but could not grasp her name from the back of his mind. Shinichi remembered back three years ago, the accident, that's right! The girl was the same one who had lost her life in the burning mansion.
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Three years previous
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There was an uneasy darkness over Japan, it was only six at night,
“Why is it dark this early?”, thought Ran.
She was just outside hanging the laundry because her father ruined the dryer by leaving a cigarette sitting on it.
“Father is so careless, I don’t know what that miserable old man would do without me acting as his maid for all of these years.”, muttered Ran.
She kept thinking about her friend of fifteen years, Shinichi Kudou. She really missed his smile and his encouraging actions hidden behind those harsh comments.
Ran yelled at her dad, “Do you know when Shinichi will be done with that big case over in Berlin? He has been gone so long and this is not like him.”
She had heard no response from her dad and decided to go check on him.
“Damn! Look at this mess. Father where are you?”
There was no reply.
“Father!”
There was a loud thud from the back of the house. Ran ran to the noise and saw her father who had been hit over the head with a bottle of Gin. There was also a silver knife sticking out of Kogorou’s shirt pocket.
Ran jumps out through the window and chases down the person who attempted to murder her father.
"Huff, huff.", Ran breathes while slowing down.
"Damnit! I lost him! Shinichi would be angry if he found out", Ran's stomache churns
"Shinichi, that's right, he hasn't called in a very long time."
Ran walks back to her house and realises a small brief case on the couch. She opens it up and finds three small pills. Poison, Antidote, and Memory are listed on little cards above the pills.
"Wow, what does this have to do with anything?", Ran says while shuffling through the brief case.
She stumbles upon a two papers with identification pictures.
"Miyana, Shiho and Kudou, Shini....", Ran pauses as she reads the name.
She leaves the house to head over to Shinichi's house with no clue what his name and picture were doing in the brief case.
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Does Ran know that Shinichi was shrunken or does she just find his name in the brief case strange? Why did Ran stop as she lost her breath? Did she really stop out of free will?
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Sorry to leave you all hanging but I am tired, I'll type up some more later
(This is my first fanfiction so it would be good to hear some comments.)
ohhhhhhhhhhhhh~!!! 
