Shingo Tsukino: A Tokyo Cop

[Kôkaku Kidôtai Tantei]

Proluge: Ok If you've read my fanfic. There is a Character Detective Shingo Tsukino. Well He's not fan-made. He was from Sailor Moon. He was the main Character's Brother with troubling past. If you've read Case Closed Solid: Detective Conan you'll read that he was in Iraq, but left out of digust and has a prostetic arm.....Well this his his story. (Note this is the first time that I'll use the original names. So please tell me if I did something wrong) Note: He is very similar to Spike from Cowboy Bebop.

In Tokyo Metropolitan Police Department. The year 2009 or about to be 2010. In the office there is a young man about in his early twenties (21 to 22). The man has brown hair and haizel eyes. His name is Shingo Tsukino. He one of the youngest, next to his friend/semi-partner Takagi Wataru. Shingo has military experince in Iraq. But left out of disgust. His past is like many others who lost parents at a young age. Along the road he met up with his girlfriend Ami Mizuno a school teacher.

So while at the office Shingo was typing his report. As usual wearing a suit and tie (thin tie). His Fedora hat was on his desk along with a few pictures of Ami back when they were young, his friends at the police station and and old picture of when he was at the army. So a woman was walking to his desk. She had short hair was wearing a business suit. She had took a chair and sat herself in front of Shingo.

"What do you want Miwako-san?" Shingo said as he was still typing. "If you want a re-match in target practice, forget I won fair and square"

"Well..No. Not that" She replyed "I just want to see how you're doing..That's all."

"Well I'am doing work that's all. I'am trying to hurry up so I can go pick Ami from Hikawa. Me and her we're supose to goto the mountians for the weekend." Shingo said as he turn he attention towards her.

"I've been meaning to ask you something. How did you start out here?" Miwako asked.

"What do you mean?" Shingo Looked at her strangley.

"Well How did you..." Trying to think of the right qustion to ask Shingo. "Well, how did you get that gun? It's not Tokyo Police issued"

"Well" Shingo had taken out the gun took out the clip and the bullet in the chamber. " It's a 45 caliber SOCOM It was a gift when I was in Iraq."

"Who Give it to you?" Miwako asked.

"Well it was an American soldier by the Name of Jodie Santemillion."

"Jodie..The name sound familiar" Miwako was thinking.

"Yeah, she use to be at Ran-kun's school along with Ami"

"So how did youmet her?"

"Well..It's a long story. ANd it started with names of liquor"

"Who?" Miwako asked

"Gin, Vodka, Korn, Chanti, Kir, and Vermouth."

"Liquor? In the army?"

"You might want to get some coffee." Shingo suggested "It's a long story"

Ok what do you think?

The Story takes place during the FBI and Black Organzation stories.

[Tive]

All right, I'll bite ... to an extent, anyway... I'd like to know how it's at all possible for Shingo to have gotten "military experience" in Iraq. Note that the Japanese forces in Iraq are there only for *humanitarian* purposes, and *not* to fight.

Um, also, I think a better way to write a fanfic that's a follow-up of a previous one is basically to 'happen to' (on purpose, of course) get the *characters* talking about their pasts or something, and then in those circumstances let your intended audience discover what you wish them to. For instance, Shingo's prosthetic arm. Instead of just plainly writing about it, you could have started the story with him muttering about what a pain-in-the-rear modern coffee-makers are, and then right then and there you'd have your intended audience start wondering "what's so hard about using a coffee-maker?" and then you could have a different person ask Shingo what's his problem, and then Shingo could explain... I mean, it's kind of like the "show it *don't* tell it" rule for movies, but only backwards coz in fanfics ya gotta tell... but doing it in character makes for a more interesting reading experience than just getting told a lot of stuff that hasn't caught your interest yet...

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tive said:

All right, I'll bite ... to an extent, anyway... I'd like to know how it's at all possible for Shingo to have gotten "military experience" in Iraq. Note that the Japanese forces in Iraq are there only for *humanitarian* purposes, and *not* to fight.

Um, also, I think a better way to write a fanfic that's a follow-up of a previous one is basically to 'happen to' (on purpose, of course) get the *characters* talking about their pasts or something, and then in those circumstances let your intended audience discover what you wish them to. For instance, Shingo's prosthetic arm. Instead of just plainly writing about it, you could have started the story with him muttering about what a pain-in-the-rear modern coffee-makers are, and then right then and there you'd have your intended audience start wondering "what's so hard about using a coffee-maker?" and then you could have a different person ask Shingo what's his problem, and then Shingo could explain... I mean, it's kind of like the "show it *don't* tell it" rule for movies, but only backwards coz in fanfics ya gotta tell... but doing it in character makes for a more interesting reading experience than just getting told a lot of stuff that hasn't caught your interest yet...

well the arm wasn't the intrest taker but the name of the woman, Jodie. Also this story takes place in the future of my fanfics. (2009 or 2010).

Also, The story of how a Japanese soldier had gotten himself mixed up with an American war will be explained.

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