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Kôkaku Kidôtai Tantei Pro Detective cry havoc, and let slip the dogs of war Posts: 3,675	Want Critique to Improve? Look no Further... Jan 20, 2006 0:08:11 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kôkaku Kidôtai Tantei on Jan 20, 2006 0:08:11 GMT -5 It's Nice...I like it
	fuse050tray021 za goat530glum134 ze From the Director of the Detective Conan Series comes. Inyasha X Bleach: www.fanfiction.net/s/3105838/1/ Can Inuyasha and Ichigo work Together to save Kagome? Inuyasha by Rumiko Takahashi, Bleach By Kubo Tite.. Please review.

Kôkaku Kidôtai Tantei Pro Detective cry havoc, and let slip the dogs of war Posts: 3,675	Want Critique to Improve? Look no Further... Jan 20, 2006 0:45:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kôkaku Kidôtai Tantei on Jan 20, 2006 0:45:56 GMT -5 the third one I like
	fuse050tray021 za goat530glum134 ze From the Director of the Detective Conan Series comes. Inyasha X Bleach: www.fanfiction.net/s/3105838/1/ Can Inuyasha and Ichigo work Together to save Kagome? Inuyasha by Rumiko Takahashi, Bleach By Kubo Tite.. Please review.