DetectiveGirl
Little Detective
Hi, people, nice to meet you!
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Post by DetectiveGirl on Jan 6, 2006 9:29:27 GMT -5
Ummmm, i'm new and don't be so rude please .this fanfic is just like a normal day. here conan is now shinichi. Two days after Conan is now Shinichi. *school* "shinichi, what have you been doing?"asked Ran. "i'm sorry, Ran.There was a case."he lied."oh"said Ran speechless."mm, ran.. there's soething i gotta tell ya." shinichi said."what is it?"asked ran curiuosly."mmm, this is school, want to go out tomorrow in a french restaurant? asked shinichi shyly.Ran kept quiet.But after 15 seconds she said"o.k!" cheerfully.Shinichi smiled.Glad that Ran accepted it. What will Shinichi tell her?I'll write more as people reply they like it.
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Post by Kôkaku Kidôtai Tantei on Jan 10, 2006 17:54:36 GMT -5
What's going to happend next
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Post by GhostDetective on Jan 10, 2006 22:10:08 GMT -5
Would be good if it had a title, other than that the first paragraph seems good so far XD
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DetectiveGirl
Little Detective
Hi, people, nice to meet you!
Posts: 28
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Post by DetectiveGirl on Jan 11, 2006 8:57:06 GMT -5
*French Restaurant*
"Shinichi, that table looks nice."said Ran pointing to a table. "O.k., let's sit there." said Shinichi. Shinichi and Ran went to the table and sat there. Then a waiter came and asked what they would like to eat. Shinichi asked for French Fries cause he hated Freench food while Ran wanted to eat something expensive."Shinichi, can you afford this?" asked Ran. Shinichi looked at the price. Then said "o.k"
*After they ate* "Shinichi, that was delicious, thank you!"Ran said."So, what is it you want to tell me?" Shinichi was speechless.But he gave all his courage to speak." I..um... Ran, do you know Conan Edogawa?" asked Shinichi. "Yes! But he went to America 4 days ago!"said Ran. "Well, Ran.. t..t..the Conan you k..k..know is me."said Shinichi afraid that Ran will be mad. Ran was shocked. Then she stood up and shouts " Shinichi!How, dare you!" People in the restaurant started to look at her. But she did'nt care."Ran, it's just.." Shinichi's word were cut off by Ran. " The Shinichi I know is not like that and will never be here!"Ran then went towards the door running to go home crying.
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DetectiveGirl
Little Detective
Hi, people, nice to meet you!
Posts: 28
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Post by DetectiveGirl on Jan 11, 2006 11:52:16 GMT -5
Oh, ya, Thanks for the comments! I forgot to post the title ..silly me^_^ It's called The Truth
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Post by Shiuchi on Feb 2, 2006 17:35:37 GMT -5
it's cool. but you should lengthen the part where he tells her . like, make her think it was a joke or something. Something like: " youre kidding right?" "...no..." Then do some other stuff
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maxwong
Little Detective
*Conan*Shinichi*Ran*
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Post by maxwong on Feb 2, 2006 23:26:47 GMT -5
Can you continue the story............it is nicee ;D
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DetectiveGirl
Little Detective
Hi, people, nice to meet you!
Posts: 28
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Post by DetectiveGirl on Feb 7, 2006 22:11:53 GMT -5
maxwong:tankyu
Sorry,if it took so long,I got too busy.
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Post by shinran_ on Feb 14, 2006 13:54:07 GMT -5
Hey, please finish it. It's heard very cool story.....
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