DC/MK fic set in the future

[queen misanagi]

i'm writing a fic, which is set in the future. almost twenty years after the supposed "fall" of the BO... kaito and shinichi have their own separate lives until a certain gem, which they thought was already destroyed, brings them back together to settle a vendetta that has lasted for three generations...

kaito and shinichi's kids will be included in the fic! i hope you guys give this fic a chance. it's my first ever fic so i realy appreciate critiques, suggestions or comments...

here's a link:

www.fanfiction.net/s/3233529/1/

[Misztina]

Wow, I've began to read it... somehow it's weird, but in a good way. It's quite funny and cute too! X3

[queen misanagi]

whoot! i forgot to mention that the first part is a chronicle of the daughter of kaito (spoiler: she's a big fan of KID but she doesn't know that her father is KID himself)

the latest chap is the best chap i've written so far (in my opinion, at least)

please review for improvements! thanks!