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Post by fangirl on Jan 1, 2007 20:29:14 GMT -5
Hi everyone, I am new here and love the series so i am going to try my luck with fan fic. This is my first time and i make some mistakes here and there but bare with me!
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Post by Chugoku-jinko on Jan 1, 2007 20:32:31 GMT -5
1)welcome to the forum. make sure you read the rules and FAQ'd before posting, so that you won't get in trouble and end up getting banned 2) we have a intro board so make your introductions there.
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Post by fangirl on Jan 1, 2007 21:25:26 GMT -5
Ran sat at her desk staring into space, once again lost in her thoughts. So much has happened lately but it all seemed unreal, it was not just the cases but something more, something connected with her. A heavy feeling fell upon her, as her eyes wonder to the lonely photo on the far corner of the desk, it was placed in a simple wooden frame and gained a thin layer of dust. She blew it away gentle and glanced at it . "shinichi" she whispered, remembering the
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Post by fangirl on Jan 1, 2007 22:54:32 GMT -5
A Case Begins
Ran sat at her desk staring into space, once again lost in her thoughts. So much has happened lately but it all seemed unreal, it was not just the cases but something more, something connected with her. A heavy feeling fell upon her, as her eyes wondered to the lonely photo on the far corner of the desk, it was placed in a simple wooden frame and gained a thin layer of dust. She blew it away gentle and glanced at it .
"shinichi" Ran whispered remembering the moment that he ran into the shadows, it was so clear and vivid in her head that for an instant she thought he was standing before her. The door flew open, detective Mouri stomped in battered and annoyed, "Ran have you made dinner yet?" he shouted.
Ran gave a made a noise and ran down stairs, "Sorry" she began "I had homework and Sonoko gave me a call" Ran explained But her father has lost interest in the conversation and muttering to himself how a famous detective like him should have his own private cheif instead of his teenaged daughter to cook. Ran hurryed to the kitchen without another word and before long Mouri could hear the chopping of vegetables and saw the steam rising. He licked his lips, sat back and watched yet another video of his favourite singer (you guessed it) Yoko!!
Meanwhile Conan was at the door struggling to reach the handle, as he went in, he heard the phone was ringing. He looked around, Ran was in the kitchen and Uncle was too distracted to even notice the phone, Conan sighed and picked it up and spoke. "Hello this is Detective Mouri's agency Conan speaking"
"Hello?" came an muffled voice "Who is this?" Conan inquired "I need help, i want to confess.." There was a loud noise in the background that Conan couldn't make out. "Please help me!" begged the voice but was then cut off.
'what was that' thought Conan making his way to the kitchen 'that man wanted to confess something but i don't know anything about him and that loud sound what was it? what cut hime off?' Questions swarmed in his head but telling Mouri was no use after all Conan was the one who solved all those cases. ****
It was now 8:00pm and everyone had sat having dinner when yet again the phone rang, this time it was Ran who answered. "Hello" ........ "Yes..... he is having dinner" "...... ok" "I will bye"
"It's the police, they said that there was a robbery at the bank just this afternoon and they want you to come over later to dicuss it" said Ran.
Mouri snorted "A bank robbery, is that it! a famous detective like me should be solving murders and mysteries!" Conan and Ran rolled their eyes then went back to dinner, Conan had thought for a moment 'wait if the man who called this afternoon was begging for help and that sound might be a gun shot.' He shaked his head deciding it was too early to draw a conclusion and intended to see the police tomorrow.
Meanwhile Ran was having thoughts of her own,'It has been a month already and Shinichi still hasn't called, is he ok?' This was not the first time that she had these negative thoughts and nor the last for she worried about her detective friend who always found himself in the middle of a case no matter where he went. 'He will come back' she reassured herself 'after all he promised.'
The detective paid no attention to the two kids and resigned himself to an early night's sleep, Conan followed not knowing what else to do. Ran on the other hand packed up and sat down to write in her diary. Today was another case, a bank robbery and also i was getting the same heavy feeling, almost like the time Shinichi disappeared. They are going to sort it out tomorrow.
Ran tapped her pen on the note book thinking of anything else worth writing. She then turned off the light and went to close the window, when she noticed a dark figure staring up at her almost spying. She couldn't tell the gender but this person was darkly dressed with an over coat and black hat, he almost blended into the night but she saw clearly the glint in their eyes. Ran shivered as a gust of wind howled, she looked again but this time they were gone after scanning the street she accepted the figure as a figment of her imagination. But just in case bolted the window and doors shut then went up staits for a good nights sleep.
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Post by fangirl on Jan 1, 2007 22:55:26 GMT -5
thanks for the advise
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Post by fangirl on Jan 1, 2007 23:17:32 GMT -5
Please post some comments, this is my first one so i don't know what to think of it right now
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Post by fangirl on Jan 2, 2007 0:19:54 GMT -5
i will add more if u like it or i will probably add more anyway
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Post by Chugoku-jinko on Jan 2, 2007 2:31:45 GMT -5
Don't post double post! or more than double posting!! Just edit all your posts onto one post
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Post by detectivemouriran on Mar 14, 2007 13:54:35 GMT -5
Go on! Go on!!!!!!!!! I WANNA HEAR THE NEXT PART!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Spiritgal304 on Mar 14, 2007 18:28:54 GMT -5
detectivemouriran No Bumping old threads! Since the last post in this thread was in Janury it's now March that means it'd dead. -.> Read the rules PLEASE!!
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