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Post by thestreetdetective on Oct 16, 2006 0:59:43 GMT -5
wow over 1000 views already. thanks guys.
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Post by gamersgateway on Oct 16, 2006 8:24:42 GMT -5
It's a pleasure Street Detective Waiting for more . Keep up the Good Work ! *Applause to thestreetdetective*
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Post by thestreetdetective on Oct 23, 2006 17:06:06 GMT -5
I know you guys have been waiting for file 7 and i am working on it, It should be out on Saturday. This is the first 5 parter. I will try to release a file a week or two if your lucky. I hope this 5 parter is interesting.
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Post by gamersgateway on Oct 23, 2006 18:35:20 GMT -5
Wanna read more of your FanFics man !
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Post by thestreetdetective on Oct 23, 2006 20:42:44 GMT -5
Well since Tech Dude wants it, here it is on a Monday no doubt. I give you all File 7 of my Untitled Internet Manga. I suck at titles ^-^
File 7 “House of 1,000 Corpses” Juno- “ Interesting” Hanako-“ Very interesting” Juno- “Very interesting indeed.” Hanako-“ Indeed, very interesting.” Juno-“ Indeed, very interesting indeed.” Hanako- “I concur.” Juno- “ I concur also” Hanako- “ I too also concur.” Juno-“ Also, I too concur” Daisuke-“ Hey can you guys stop now? We understand that this is interesting but can we move on now?” Juno- “ Fine. (Under his breath) you lost anyways” Hanako- “ I agree Daisuke, we should move on.(under her breath) I did not” Juno-“Yeah you kinda did.” Hanako- “ No I kinda didn’t” Juno-“ Yeah you did, you SO DID!” Daisuke- “ Hey that doesn’t mean go argue about something else. God can something happen to make these two stop?” Just then a distorted voice comes over the intercom Daisuke- (Thinking) “ Talk about divine intervention.” Mysterious Voice- “ Now that everyone is gone, your job is to find them. I want you to figure out how they disappeared.” Juno- “ Question, why would you make them disappear and then make us find them?” Mysterious Voice-“ You have 1 hour to solve this or they will die. Your on the clock.” Juno- (Thinking) “ Just outright ignoring me like that.” Hanako- “ There is something different about this room” Juno- “ Hmm gee, could it be that 1,000 people just vanished?!” 50 mins have pasted Juno- (Thinking) Damn, how the hell do you make that many people disappear like that? Blackwood you got anything?” Hanako- “ I’ll leave things up to you, Mr. Katsuo.” Juno- “ Hehe.(Thinking) Bastard. She knows but won’t tell me and then she calls me Mr. like that. I won’t lose to her.” Daisuke sees a flower on the floor next to the wall. The flower is mangled with missing petals. Daisuke- “ Poor flower.” Juno- “ Hmm? What are you talking bout Dai?” Daisuke-“ Oh the flower on the floor is all mangled up.” Juno- “ Hmm really?” Juno walks over to the flower and then looks up at the ceiling. Juno- “Hey Dai, you said you heard a swooshing sound earlier right?” Daisuke-“ Yeah, I heard it during the blackout.” Juno then starts smiling at Daisuke Daisuke- “That smile! You figured it out didn’t you.” Juno keeps smiling Daisuke- “You did figure it out! Tell me, what is it!” MV-“ Time is up. Have you an answer?” Juno- “Yeah I do” Tomoe and Asa huddle around Daisuke Asa- “So Daisuke, does he really know?” Tomoe- “Yeah, does he?” Daisuke- “ Of course, Juno has a knack for things like this. He will probably say something really profound and logical that none of us would ever think of.” MV-“ What is your answer?” Juno- “ Simple really, it’s a box.” Daisuke- “0_0” Tomoe- “ We’re screwed.” Asa- “ Your right, I wouldn’t have thought of that” Hanako- “(While sipping tea) Looks like the Grimm Reaper will be busy today.” MV- “ A box? Care to explain?” Juno- “ Sure. First take a look at that flower on the ground. Its horribly mangled no?” Tomoe- “ Yeah it’s pretty bad.” Juno- “That’s because something heavy and fast collided with it, something like this wall.” Asa- “ Where is your proof?” Juno- “ Daisuke said he heard a swooshing noise right? I believe that it was the walls forming around us. As proof of that there is a petal stuck where the wall meets the ceiling.” Tomoe- “ Okay so how does a flower prove that we are in a box?” Juno- “ It doesn’t, all the flower proves is that something heavy collided with it. The proof of the box lies in the ceiling, more so, the chandelier.” Everyone looks up Daisuke- “ So it’s a chandelier, what’s your point?” Juno- “ Look carefully at the rays of light.” Daisuke- “ I Get It! It’s the spot where the ceiling meetings the line of the 2 walls right?” Juno- “ Yeah, light travels in straight lines so when it hits something solid like a wall, it will usually bounce back. So where the light hits the spot Daisuke mentioned, it should travel on that well to the left of the line, but instead and the top where the ceiling is at the ray keeps going straight. Why do you think that’s so?” Daisuke- “ Because nothing is in the path of the light?” Juno- “ Correct! Nothing is there because we are in an uncompleted box.” Daisuke- “But why does only the top have space?” Juno- “ Probably as to not let us hear the wall hit the ceiling since the walls are coming from the ground.” Asa- “ So then where are the missing people?” Juno- “ No one is missing. We are all right here.” MV- “ Is that your final answer?” Juno- “ Don’t make me repeat myself.” There is silence Suddenly the walls retract to reveal an empty room Daisuke- “ Hey no one is here, Juno I thought you said we were all here.” Juno- “ We are. I didn’t hear anyone through the wall so I guess our mysterious voice already let them go. Besides the point wasn’t to find the people, it was to figure out how to make something disappear in front of everyone. Daisuke- “ Well still, that was an amazing deduction. I can’t believe you did that without help.” Juno- “ Actually I had help from Hanako” Daisuke- “What?” Juno-“ Did you hear her say something is strange about the room. She was telling me to focus on the dimension of the room. She could have just as easily of said “That’s strange” or something.” Daisuke- “ I see.” MV- “ The game is not over, here is your second task. Solve this!” A paper falls from the ceiling onto the floor Daisuke –“ So soon?” Juno- “ You act like you just solved something.” Hanako goes and picks up the paper Juno- “ What’s it say?” Hanako turns the paper over to everyone The paper reads, “ Those of you that want my prize must first proof your worth. Since I want some fun I will leave you clues. Clue number 1: “Go to the place that gives rays of life and death.”
End of File 7
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Post by gamersgateway on Oct 25, 2006 7:35:02 GMT -5
Wow ! I really enjoyed that man ! *applause to thestreetdetective* Bravo ! ;D Cool Man ! Really Cool ! ;D File 7 was really interesting , The Mystery was very simple .....Police need guys like you man Waiting for more so Keep it up
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Post by thestreetdetective on Nov 8, 2006 18:37:02 GMT -5
Well sorry for the delay but i have bee busy with sports, school and Final Fantasy XII well its finally here
File 8 –“ The Logic”
Juno- “The place that gives rays of life and death? What could that be?” Daisuke- “Maybe it’s a light bulb.” Juno- “A bulb?” Daisuke- “Well yeah, people use light bulbs as incubators for eggs which give them life and if you leave it on too long it could kill the egg.” Juno-“I don’t think that’s it, it would be almost impossible to find which bulb has the next clue. I think its something a bit more simple than that.” Daisuke- “Yeah you’re probably right, it would take too much time also.” Juno- “Time…” Daisuke- “Huh?” Juno-“Oh nothing. So does anyone else have any ideas?” Asa- “ A fire?” Tomoe- “ A tanning bed?” Hanako-(Thinking) “Tanning bed she says. Think, what gives rays of life? The sun?” Juno- “ Sun….sunshine, sun rays?” Hanako- “ Rays? Sun rays, sunshine, sun shine, shine, shi ne.” Juno-“!” Hanako-“!” Daisuke- “ I wonder what it could be though, this is tough.” Juno- “ The sun.” Asa- “ Eeh?” Juno- “ The sun gives rays of life to plants, animals, humans and other life. The sun has sunshine but in Japanese the English word “Shine” can be the seen as “Shi ne.” In other words he is saying to go to the place that has a sun.” Tomoe- “Yeah but the sun is everywhere, it would be impossible to find the spot where the next clue is at!” Hanako- “That would be true, but the clue said to go to the place meaning a specific location. Since we can’t leave the house that eliminates the chance of the next clue being outside.” Asa- “So where would that be in the house” Juno- “ My bet is that painting of a sunset over there.” Everyone rushes to the painting Daisuke- “Well now we just have to fi…” Tomoe- “ I found it!” Hanako- “ Fast one you are. Well what does it say?” Tomoe- “ It says “ Go to the room with the most oxygen.” Juno- “ Why does that sound so familiar?” Daisuke- “ IT’S THE PLANT ROOM!” Juno- “ Dai, calm down. How did you figure that out?” Daisuke- “ Remember in Final Fantasy VII were your in the mansion trying to find the combo for the safe? One of the clues was go to the place with the most oxygen and it was the plant room.” Hanako- “Does this place have a greenhouse?” Tomoe-“ Yeah’s its out back.” Juno- “ Well that’s our best lead.” They all arrive at the greenhouse, there is a paper attached to a window pane Daisuke- “ Here see I told ya.” Juno- “ It says go to the place where it all started” Asa- “ WHHAAAT? We gotta go back downstairs? Its already 9pm and I’m bushed.” Hanako- “ I too need to return to my quart… room” Tomoe- “ I’m tired also” Daisuke- “ Yeah I’m beat Juno.” Juno- “ Fine, everyone go to bed and we’ll start up again tomorrow.” Everyone goes back to there room The lights are out Juno- “ Daisuke, you remember that case about the 294 million yen? Daisuke- “ Yeah, there were 3 robbers who cleaned out the entire Chanpuru jewelery store. I think 1 died and the other got arrested but the 3rd one was found. Why? Hey you don’t think…” Juno is fast asleep Daisuke- “ This guy..” Daisuke goes to sleep Scene changes to a pitch black room with the sound of rummaging Voice- “Dammit, where is it?” Juno- “ I thought it was you…” Turns on the light Juno-“…Tomoe-san” Tomoe- “ What? No I was umm..” Juno- “ Looking for the missing 294 mil right? Tomoe- “ Who the hell are you?” Juno- “Me? Just a kid who likes to play detective; you wanna join, I’ll be the detective since your already the crook. See I think that your were part of the trio that robbed the jewelry store a while ago. I also believe that you killed the ringleader in order to have all the money to yourself. And since the other was arrested you would have no obstacles, or at least you didn’t think so. Your boss thought you might pull something like that and hid the loot somewhere in this mansion. The only thing he left were clues and you couldn’t figure it out. You were stuck until you heard about the Annual Detective Mystery Weekend Summit and then implemented plan. You probably bribed the host to leave so that your plan could work after you saw mine and Hanako’s deduction. Tomoe- “ Where is your proof?” Juno- “ What you serious? First, you were the only person, in fact, the only person to find the paper on the painting before we even started. 2nd, you know about the greenhouse in the back even though we were never allowed to go to the back of the house, and finally the most obvious one, you’re the only person standing in this very room where it all started, only a member of that group would have known about this room.” Tomoe- “ Then how did you know? Maybe you wanted the money too?” Juno-“ Oh I just happened to see the money when I came into the room during the first mystery.” Tomoe-“ What about Shigeru, he was gone the whole time, surely he..” Juno- “ I had my suspicions, but I think that he was just following the orders of the host which was you. If he had been the one behind all this then he too would have been here. Face it, you lost.” Tomoe- “ How did you know that this wasn’t part of the mystery weekend?’ Juno- “ The moment when we received the first paper and were given no time limit. That’s when I started thinking that maybe someone was willing to wait until we solved the mystery, anyways there is no point in explaining even more, like I said you lost.” Tomoe- “ Just one more question.” Juno- “ Didn’t I say no more?” Tomoe- “ Oh but this is a good question. (Tomoe pulls out a gun) Just how do you plan on leaving this place alive?” Juno- (Unenthusiastically) “Oh wow a gun, never had that pointed at me before. I guess you could shoot me but then the cops would find you in less than a day.” Tomoe- “ Cops?” Juno- “ Yeah, I’m not the only one who thought you were guilty. At this moment I bet you that Hanako has already alerted the police about your whereabouts. Besides you most likely have the same gun you used for the robbery. You must have kept it out of fear of it being traced to you, so if you shoot me with the same gun, its like giving yourself to the police on a silver platter.” Scene changes to the front of the mansion outside, Tomoe is being escorted by the police Daisuke- “ Wow Juno, you already solved to cases, you should be a detective.” Juno- “ Umm I am a detective, kinda.” Hanako- “ Well Mr. Detective Kinda, I’ll be seeing you around then.” A stretch limo pulls up and Hanako goes inside. The limo leaves Daisuke- “ Wasn’t that a bit much? By the way, were is our ride?” Juno-“ Its coming, I called my mom a while back so… ah there she is.” An SUV pulls up Juno- “ Eeh? Dad?” Ichin Katsuo- “ What’s with the “eeh?” can’t a dad pick up his son?” Juno- “ I guess so. Come on Dai lets go.” Ichin- “ You know your gonna have to tell me what happened right?” Juno- “Yeah I know” Ichin drives away Asa is by herself in her car on the phone Asa- “ Yeah I think that he knows that I am following him. Yeah I guess I have no choice then but to use the other approach.”
End of File 8 Next File- “ Blue Mondays”
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Post by Kôkaku Kidôtai Tantei on Nov 10, 2006 21:40:27 GMT -5
Wow Asa is Spying on Juno...you should have this published.
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Post by Games Tracer on Nov 17, 2006 10:53:31 GMT -5
Well done thestreetdetective You really should be a writter and a detective at the same time. Yeah KKT ... Asa kinda suspicious at this moment.
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Post by thestreetdetective on Nov 19, 2006 0:23:05 GMT -5
Hey all, i just got back from my irvine tournament. I feel like started the next file tomorrow. Man you guys are awesome for commenting.
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Post by Mizuhara on Nov 20, 2006 5:46:28 GMT -5
i just read it..its really nice...
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Post by thestreetdetective on Dec 4, 2006 17:29:22 GMT -5
Im so sorry you guys, i have been super duper busy with bball and finals are coming up so i have decided to release the scripts for file 9, 10 and 11 all at once, just bear with me on this. Okay impatient, i will release 9 today Status File9- 75 % done File 10- 0 (have idea thought already) File 11- 0 (have idea thought already).
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Post by thestreetdetective on Dec 15, 2006 16:30:23 GMT -5
File 9 for all you loyal fans who waited so long. School sucks.
File 9 “Blue Monday”
Juno- “ Oh Yeah! School starts today. Now I can go and learn and ahh who am I kidding; school sucks.” Juno walks downstairs to the kitchen Gloria-“Good Morning Juno!!!!” Juno- (Thinking) “Oi Oi aren’t you a bit too excited.” Gloria-“ I’m so excited. Today is the day that my little Juno goes into high school.” Juno-“And that makes you excited? Anyways where’s dad I am going to leave now.” Gloria-“ Oh your father left already. He said that he needed to get to the lab early this morning.” Juno-“ Geez! (While putting on his white Nike Air Force 1’s) Such is the life of the chief of the Technology Research and Development team at Chanpuru City Labs. Well then I’m off.” Gloria-“ But you haven’t eaten anything.” Juno-“ I’ll get something at school. Later” Gloria-“ Have a good day son.” (Juno is walking by himself towards school when he looks down at his watch) “Three, Two, One…” Daisuke-“ Oi, Juno wait up!” Juno- (J) “Daisuke! It’s about time, I was just about to leave you!” Daisuke-“ It’s about time nothing, you have been doing this to me since the 6th grade!” Juno-“ Well it’s like I said before, in America we don’t usually walk to school instead we take a bus and wait for our friends at the bus stop, so im still adjusting to this. Daisuke-“ But it’s been 3 years since then. Anyways, aren’t you excited about going to school and seeing all those young and beautiful high school girls? Who knows, maybe you will have some 8’s in your class. Juno-“ Knowing my luck, I will have nothing but 2’s and 3’s.” Daisuke- “ Haha probably. Well here we are Chanpuru High. Guess we should go inside. Say what your schedule like?” Juno- “Oh here you go” Juno gives Daisuke a slip of paper with his schedule on it Daisuke- “Nan.. Nani? Physics? Economy? European History? Music Appreciation? Art History? You have all these honor classes and some are for seniors! We only have English class together. And you’re in…Weight lifting?” Juno-“ Hey im a little frail and I figured I might bulk up now so that in the summer I will have the beach body.” Daisuke- “ So smart… it’s a bit frightening. Well then im off to class. See ya in English” Juno- “Yeah, see ya.” Juno walks into a classroom and its filled with 2’s and 3’s (Not very attractive and pretty much damn ugly girls” Juno- (Thinking) “Yappari” (Means I thought so or as I thought, I think thats what it means) Juno goes to take a seat Teacher: Good morning students and welcome to Art History! Today will be your first day as high school students. Now my name is Mr…” Just then everyone but Juno gets up and leaves the class Teacher- “ Huh? Geez all those students where in the wrong class? Doesn’t anyone read the room number before they come in?” Juno- (Thinking) “So was everyone in the wrong class? Then where are…?” Just then a mob of students rush into the class Students: “Sorry I’m late.” “I was in the wrong classroom.” “I overslept.” “My mom’s car broke so I had to run here.” Teacher-“ Umm that’s okay just please take your seats.” Juno- (Thinking) “All the girls in here are 8-10’s. Alright (J)” Teacher- “ Well since we are all here I will introduce myself. I’m Hideyoshi-sensei and this is Art History. Now I will take roll” Juno- “ Well as long as he doesn’t make a big deal about my last name then I guess I’ll be okay.” Hideyoshi-“ Kasumi Miki” Miki-“ Here!” Hideyoshi- “ Katsuo Juno” Juno-“ Here!” Hideyoshi-“ Katsuo? Isn’t that the famous scientist’s name also? OH! You’re his son right?” Juno-“ Uhh yeah. (Damn)” Students-“ Ohh rich boy.” “ I bet he gets all A’s.” “He’s probably a super genius” Now all the students start talking Hideyoshi-“ Now calm down everyone.” Continues reading the roll sheet. “ Tamayo Asa” Asa-“ Here” Juno- “ Oh Asa is in my class, that’s strange.” Class is over and it is Juno’s last class before lunch Juno- “ (Thinking) Okay this is weird, Asa has been in all of my classes so far. Normally this could be seen as a coincidence if I was in all freshmen or sophomore classes, but my classes are all honors with a few senior classes. Maybe…” Physics teacher Michiko-“ Katsuo is something bothering you?” Juno-“ Uh no, nothing at all” Michiko-sensei-“ Then do you mind reading this passage about the different theories?” Juno-“ Umm sure.” It is now lunchtime Daisuke- “ Hey Juno” Juno-“ Hey Dai, hurry up will ya I gotta eat my lunch.” Daisuke-“ So how were your classes?” Juno- “ Umm they were normal. Oh yeah! That girl Asa from the mansion is in my classes.” Daisuke-“ Oh you mean the girl over there waving to you?” Juno-“ Eeh?” Asa-“ (J) Juno! Can I talk to you for a second?” Juno- “ That depends if you can talk and walk at the same time” Juno, Asa and Daisuke are walking to a table Asa- “ Man these classes we have sure are fun.” Juno- “ I guess so, I mean it’s only the first day of school you know” Asa- “ Yeah your right?” Daisuke- “ (Thinking) Is she okay?” They sit down at a table Asa- “ Oh I forgot the ketchup! Daisuke could you be a dear and go wait in line and get me some ketchup?” Daisuke- “ Umm sure. (Why me? I don’t even know you.)” Juno-“ Oh yeah and get me a chocolate milk?” Juno- “ So just tell me straight up, who are you?” Asa- “ What do you mean” Juno- “ At the mansion you said “I know its amazing what a 14yr old kid and a high school freshman can do nowadays” when I never once told you my age or anything about me so that leads me to believe that you have been researching me. When I asked if you guys where in the room of chance you said “Maybe you dreamt it up, I mean does it make sense that you guys would be in a room of chance and no one else here as heard of”’ I didn’t say that there was anyone else in that room besides me which also tells me that you were also in that room. So exactly who are you?” Asa- “ My my how perceptive of you. I am just a person who happens to very interested in your well being.” Juno- “What do you mean by that?” Asa-“ To put it bluntly, your life is in danger.” Juno- “ What?” Asa- “ Its my job to keep you from harm until your ready” Juno- “For what?” Asa- “ To join us” Juno- “ So your apart of some secret society that needs to protect me long enough so that I join you?” Asa- “ Well that’s a way to put it.” Juno-“ I didn’t tell Daisuke to get me whole or 2% milk, I’ll be right back. You might wanna keep an eye on me in case endanger myself. Who knows, I might slip on some water or get a cut for the milk carton.” Juno comes back with Daisuke Juno-“ Umm who are you?” Male Student-“ What’s it too you scrub?” Juno- “ Well that’s my seat and my lunch.” Male Student- “ Well now its my seat and lunch, im hungry so beat it.” Juno- (Getting mad) “Who the hell you think you are?” Male Student eats Juno’s food. Juno- “ You son of bi…” The male student collapses onto the floor and starts sweating profusely Juno- “ This guy… he’s been poisoned?” Juno looks at Asa Asa- “ I guess that they are already on the move”
End of file 9
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Post by thestreetdetective on Dec 27, 2006 1:34:50 GMT -5
Hey all hope you all had a great christmas. I am trying to find time to finish these files while balancing college ball (its a b****)
Also, i know this is early to say, but during the summer time i will take a break from this manga as in i will still write it but i will release it after summer. Instead i will give you guys a preview of my new internet manga ( which will be in art form after i get my scanner up and running). Just a little info on it, its an action manga ( Like DBZ but with a better story and characters, it will be fun) Later!
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Post by Mizuhara on Dec 29, 2006 4:50:21 GMT -5
^cool...
this is really nice...really creative
and hope you have a good break...
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