Nita
Little Detective
Hattori Heiji and Kudo Shinichi fangirl (currently reading RPG's on Angie-neechan's site)
Posts: 32
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Post by Nita on Dec 2, 2004 17:11:52 GMT -5
this is a fic that i have down on paper and am just now putting it into the computer so i will type in a couple paragraphs at a time
They say that rain is the tears of angels. Angels who have lost their wings. Perhaps they are now disguised as humans. Wandering lost in the hubub of busy cities. Trying for a second chance. Maybe Ran was, is, an angel for when she cries over me, well Shinichi, it always seems to rain.
Oh, sorry, my name is Edogawa Conan, and this is my wtory.
You may think that it all started that day at Tropical land and in a way, it did. It started my new life, as Conan, but the story I'm going to tell you now started about three years ago. It involes murders, kidnappings, broken hearts and spirits, and very unlikely alliances.
That day, three years ago, as always started with a cal. I'm usually up early enough to recieve those calls but unfortuneatly I was bedridded with another pexky cold. I frowned when the phone kept ringing, however, as Ran usually woke up to the phone thinking, hoping, it was me. I heard the click of the answering machine and started out of bed before feezin when I heard my father's voice. It wasn't really shocking that it was him, it was what he said and how he said it that got me.
"C...conan?" his voice was strained and hoarse. It also seemed a tad tired. "Oh to hell with it, Shinichi!" My heart lept getting me into motion and I ran, more like scrambled for the phone.
"Dad?" I hissed my heart pounding as I strained my ears for any sign of movement. "What are you doing? If Ran heard that all hell would break loose."
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Post by Kaito on Dec 2, 2004 17:34:51 GMT -5
.......... *speechless* I LIKE IT HOW IT STARTS!!! Write more plz!!
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Nita
Little Detective
Hattori Heiji and Kudo Shinichi fangirl (currently reading RPG's on Angie-neechan's site)
Posts: 32
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Post by Nita on Dec 2, 2004 17:59:09 GMT -5
yay its likable! ;D will do Kaito! And please... if you see something wrong please tell me!
"Shinichi," Yusaku said his tone demanding my complete attention. "This is important son."
Satisfied that Ran and Kogoro were still sleeping I settled down on the couch ready for almost anything my father said.
"Its your mother," Yusaku's voice broke.
"What?" I screamedbefoer slapping a hand to my mouth my aching throat screaming at me along wiht my mind. "M..mom? What happened?" I whispered now kneeling on the couch gripping the arm rest with all my sever-year-old strength.
"Is that Shin-chan?" I heard a weak voice in the background and waited while the phone was switched over. "Whin-chan?"
Beneath the hoarse voice strewn with sleepiness I could just make out my mother's cheerful voice.
"Mom!" I said dropping into my cheerful kid voice when I heard noises from the bathroom. "What's wrong?"
"I'm sick Shin-chan," I heard the pain and sadness carefully masked in her voice. "Yusaku's just overreacting."
"I'm not," came my father's voice form another phone. "We'll be coming back in two days although it would be best if Yukiko stayed in America."
"Why?" I asked extreamely worried but careful to sound like a child.
"Oh honey," mom said and I pictured her sitting in bed crying with dad's arm around her sholders. "I have breast cancer."
I dropped the phone staring at it mouth open. Now that I wasn't prepared for.
"Conan-kun?" Ran poked her sleepy head in the room and I couldn't help but smile at her.
"Auntie Yukiko was looking for Shinichi-san," I said my voice dripping with little boy worry. "Ran-neechan... what's breast cancer?"
As I thought Ran gasped and picked up the phone.
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Post by Angie on Dec 2, 2004 21:17:55 GMT -5
Keep going!! I like cliffy, but not when I'm the one reading!
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Post by Kaito on Dec 3, 2004 6:21:41 GMT -5
Noooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! She can't diiiiiieeeeeeeeeee! ;_; There can is a surgerry, she can live~!
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Post by stargazing on Dec 3, 2004 11:13:11 GMT -5
Keep going!! I like cliffy, but not when I'm the one reading! Ha! Now you know how we feel! @ Nita-Keep writing please!!!!!! *pacing*
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Nita
Little Detective
Hattori Heiji and Kudo Shinichi fangirl (currently reading RPG's on Angie-neechan's site)
Posts: 32
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Post by Nita on Dec 4, 2004 18:32:02 GMT -5
i finally got around to typing some in so here goes the next part
“Mrs. Kudo?” she said worriedly. “Ok, Yukiko, no I haven’t seen or heard from ‘Shin-chan’ in a while. Now why did Conan-kun say breast cancer?” Ran’s face went from worried to as if she had seen a ghost. “Oh! Yukiko if only Shinichi were here!”<br> I sighed and got off the couch to grab my mask now that I wasn’t scrambling for the phone. When I got back Ran was hanging up said device.
“Oh, Conan-kun,” she said wiping her eyes quickly. “I forgot to tell you Dr. Agasa called last night after I put you in bed to say your parents were coming to take you to America for a while.”<br> “Really?” I asked not having to fake excitement. Usually when Agasa called Ai had found something interesting.
“Hai,” she said heading back to her room with me following. “I’ll walk you over after breakfast, ok?”<br> “Arigato, Ran-neechan!” I chirped before sprinting to my room and stripping my pajamas. I came out later with the voice changing gas mask on, khaki pants held up by the soccer ball belt, and the stun gun watch/flashlight on my thin wrist.
“Conan-kun!” Ran called from the kitchen. “Could you wake my father up for me?”<br> “Hai!” I called and grumpily made my way into the old man’s room. “Uncle! It’s breakfast time!” I said stepping around the junk littered on the floor.
“Go away kid!” came his grumpy call from the bed. “I have a killer hangover so leave me alone.”<br> I sighed and grabbed the glass of water on his nightstand and charted my escape path.
“But Ran-neechan said that if you don’t get up no breakfast,” acting fast I flung the water at Kogoro and sprinted through his room and made it out the door before he was even out of bed.
“Is dad up?” Ran said from the kitchen as I lazily walked to the living room.
“Hai!” I said cheerily coughing slightly from my cold as my parents’ conversation came back to me. “Ran-neechan… what exactly is breast cancer?” of course I knew… I just had to keep up the image of a kid.
“It’s a disease women can get,” she said bringing the food out as Kogoro came out of the bathroom scowling but clean shaven for once.
“Will Auntie Yukiko be all right?” I asked my eyes going wide.
“What’s wrong with Yukiko-chan?” Kogoro asked and I wanted to strangle him for using that honorific.
“Yukiko-san,” I beamed at Ran, “was diagnosed with breast cancer.”<br> “No!” Kogoro looked horrified as we all sat down, me on a couple of phone books. “Poor thing.”<br> “Oh, Conan-kun’s going to America with his parents today,” Ran said after five minutes of silent eating.
“For good?” I rolled my eyes at his hopefulness.
“Dr. Agasa said perhaps,” Ran said. I choked.
If Dr. Agasa said I was going to America for good maybe, just maybe, Ai had found a permanent cure! I was practically bouncing in my seat in anticipation by the end of break fast and Ran and I wee out the door in record time. When we went past my house we both stopped. Ran in hope and longing and me in excitement of being well… me again
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Post by Kaito on Dec 4, 2004 20:23:27 GMT -5
gaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRGH!!!!! AAAAAND??
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Nita
Little Detective
Hattori Heiji and Kudo Shinichi fangirl (currently reading RPG's on Angie-neechan's site)
Posts: 32
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Post by Nita on Dec 4, 2004 21:27:28 GMT -5
AAAAnnndddd...
"Shinichi," I heard her sigh and I looked up at her. "Oh, Conan-kun, do you think he'll be back soon?"
"Hai!" I said a little to quickly. "Shinichi-neesan will be here soon! I just know it," I hastened to save myself.
She smiled down at me and took my hand again. We walked the grand total of about twenty feet to Agasa's and stopped in front of the door.
"Now, Conan-kun, behave yourself and don't forget to try your best in school," beyond that I stopped listening, the excitement causing me to fidget. "And call ok?"
I nodded making a mental note not to call at an absurd time and I hugged Ran's legs before she squatted and hugged me back.
"Promise to call me?" she whispered.
"Hai," I leaned over blushing and kissed her cheek. "I promise Ran-neechan."
She kissed my forehead and got up. Giving me one last smile she turned around to walk to school. Absently realizing that I was really far behind in school I rang Agasa's door bell.
"Hello?" he said looking over my head. "Oh! Shinichi!" finally he looked down. "I was begging to wonder what happened to you."
"I got sick," I said kicking off my shoes before stepping inside. "Ran made me go to bed early."
"I see it helped," Agasa said closing the door behind me. "Now, Haibara-san found a... cure of somesort."
"Its the same temporary pill," Ai said from behind me. "But as long as you take these," she handed me a bottle, "your body should last for a month. Any more than that at a time could kill you Kudo-kun."
"What are they?" I asked taking out a round orange pill.
"They are a type of chinese candy," she said handing me another bottle. "Made with the same alcohol as the pill. Now... I'll give you two bottles at a time. If you finish or loose a bottle call me and we'll order another."
"Can I?" I said inching towards the front door again.
"Sure," she shrugged and I ran to my house not bothering with my shoes.
Once in my house I ripped off my green shirt in the main hall and sidposed myself of my gadgets and socks before sprinting to my room and stripping myself further. Calming myself I got out my old school uniform and popped the pill into my mouth grabbing a pillow to muffle my screams.
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Post by Kaito on Dec 5, 2004 0:52:08 GMT -5
ooooohhh WOW! *_* I imagine~! ^^ The lesson has started. The door opens and... Shinichi says "Sorry, I'm late" XD
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Nita
Little Detective
Hattori Heiji and Kudo Shinichi fangirl (currently reading RPG's on Angie-neechan's site)
Posts: 32
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Post by Nita on Dec 5, 2004 2:37:21 GMT -5
i actually may be changing the part where Shinichi comes in... but that would be funny he jsut walks in and says acting all cool, "Hey... sorry i'm late," and then takes his seat... Ran would be sooooo mad.... heh... oh sorry must get to getting that typed! ;D
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Post by Kaito on Dec 5, 2004 4:10:59 GMT -5
eheheh.... ^^; I'm not saying it MUST be like that.... ^^;;;;;; that's what I imagine....... ^^
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Post by stargazing on Dec 6, 2004 11:25:04 GMT -5
VERY good story! So he's going to turn back soon, right?
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Post by Angie on Dec 7, 2004 3:02:34 GMT -5
wriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiittteeeee........
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Post by stargazing on Dec 7, 2004 8:15:52 GMT -5
wriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiittteeeee........ Wha--?
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