"The truth Over the years" fanfic crimes/romance~

[acedetectivefreya]

Chapter 18
" A detective's love"
Shinichi Called Ran on the phone that day it was his third day.He called her then her father answered:
"Mouri Detective Agency How can I help you?"
Shinichi" Ah...Hi Mr.Mouri is Ran there?"
Kogoro"You again? Kudo-twirp....Wait a second"

"Twirp My butt...Lazyhead" He thought as waiting for her....

Ran answered in a hurry "Hi Shinichi... "
Shinichi"" your going out,where ?"
Ran"How did you know ?"
SHinichi"Your voice seemed troubled and the way you pick the phone up was a bit bumpy..indidcating that you were in a hurry"

Ran "Oh SHinichi your really a genius. "

Shinichi"were are you going?"

Ran"I'm finding some part-time job...You see to help my dad with my tuition."

Shinichi"Oh Ran you could have ask me some money if you want to"

Ran"No SHinichi you've help me a lot.but I'm trying to work for it right now....In the bakery shop next to the other corner"

Shinichi"Oh That bakery.The Lurrione Bakery?"

Ran"Yeah Mr.Kalo accepted me"

Shinichi"Oh okay then bye..."

Ran"Wait SHinichi!!!..." "darn that guy hangin up like that"

Ran bid her goodbyes to her sleeping father.then she wore her uniform and went to the bakery.She steppped in the door and to her surprise Mr.Kalo was there in front.

"Oh Ran your here already..isn't that a bit early" Mr.Kalo said...he then showed her inside then he spoke again"Oh and there's another new employee just hired today he's...."

"Hi Ran!!! ;D" said a voice pretty familliar to Ran...
as Ran looked back she saw a boy she was familliar with...

"SHINICHI!!! what are you doing in here?!"She screamed

"Ir's not like it's the first time you saw me right? ;D" He reassured "What's that reaction for?"

"This young man is a king guy..he's salary isn't giving to him..he said all his salary will be added to your salary instead..meaning his pay will be yours for free." Mr.Kalo

Ran looked at Shinichi and pinched him in the face.."You idiot" she said.."You shouldn't have done that ..for me"

"It's alright Ran....I'm always here for you..I'm your bestfriend right? anyway I don't have anything to do at home.so i thought on helping you out" He replied chuckling in a very cute way.

"Anyway I have the perfect solution since the Famous highscool handsome detective Kudo is in my shop. I will!!! SHOW HIM TO THE WORLD HAHAHAHHA"M.Kalo Laughed
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"WHAT!!!" Shinichi and Ran screamed.....

"Yes Shinichi today..you will be our prime income....when ladies hear that your here they'd be bound to buy something and if they buy any cake worth more than 2000 yen They'll have a kiss from the famous Shinichi Kudo." Mr.Kalo said.

So after about an Hour Ladies everywhere came and lined up at the Lurrione shop. Shinichi was forced to wear black Suit with a purple necktie. He was kissing them on the cheek.and they were gigglin like crazy then when the other girls buy already..they'd line up again. Many Media came and pictured Shinichi Kissin.And it came to the News that the Lurrione Bakery has Shinichi working for them and is giving free kisses.to both young and old..."

"I prefer younger ones" Shinichi said infront of the Camera's
Ran "SHINICHI!!??"
Shinichi"Sorry dear"

Then On the Line..Shinichi saw his girl-friends at school.and he said"Oh men..I didn't thought they had a crush on me"...

"Hi Kudo..I'm here for some kiss" Naoko said
"Hi...Naoko..Thnx for comin" Shinichi said.
"Hi Kudo great shop" Sao said
"Hi Sao thnx.."
Then Shinichi couldn't believe that Ran lined up too...
"You too? "He asked
"Hmmmm...."She replied bushin
"Well your extra special" He said..
"Huh?" Ran said

Then Shinichi held her waist then lifted her in the air and kissed her in the cheek..then he put her down ....
"You know what I mean?" SHinichi said chuckling again like he used too. Ran just blushed the went back to her position.

Girls everywhere complained on why she was the only one like that.
"She's special" He answered..
Then the media asked"Is she your girlfriend? Mr.Kudo"
"that's my own privacy" Shinichi answered back...
"So she is your girlfriend" They shot back.
"THAT"S NOT IT..."They both said.

The day ended..and the both of them was tired sitting on the bench...Ran was talking while SHinichi fell the need for sleep. Ran then noticed he wasn't replying..She looked then she found him asleep. She then cuddled herself near to him. she thought that the sun was setting.and it looked beautiful on their spot. The Shinichi unconsciousley held her near to his face.Ran just blushed more and looked at him..but he was still asleep. Then he spoke the words...."Wait for me Ran..It wouldn't take much longer...when you and I will finally be together"
Ran was just shock to hear those words....What does he mean?

TO BE CONTINUED.

[acedetectivefreya]

Chapter 19
"Shinichi in trouble "

Shinichi and Ran was going home from their work and Shinichi was talking on how tiring kissing ladies are...and he was blabbering about a novel he just read...The Da Vinci Code".

Ran"Yeah yeah Kissing ladies are boring and I supposed when you kissed me earlier was also boring" She said in a big Frown all over her face.

Shinichi"I didn't mean that.I was only joking"

They went passed an electronics store and Tv's were on display.Ran stopped to look at the news.and The news said that the 17 yearold Shinichi Kudo is currently working at the Lurrione Bakery.

Ran"Anyway you look good there on the Tv Shinichi."

Then As Shinichi remembered.He wasn't supposed to reveal himself to the media.

Shinichi"OH MY GOD!!! I"M NOT SUPPOSED TO BE ON THE TV!!! DAMN IT"

"Why Shinichi?" Ran asked looking puzzled.she was a bit confused.before when she remembered "He liked being In tv now he's running away from it?"

Shinichi pulled her away from it.Then he ran as fast as he can to an abandoned alley pulling her .The they were panting in there.

Ran"Shinichi why don't you want to be in the tv?"

Shinichi"It's just I can't be exposed...But I am ..Ran can you do a big Favor for me?"

Ran"What?"

Shinichi"Don't come near me ever again or even think to talk with me"

Ran"Why SHinichi?"

Shinichi"You just have to stay away!!!"

Shinichi Ran again out of sight.In order for her protection he had to stay away from her.Even if he was hurt.

The next day.
Ran was calling Shinichi's phone.Nobody was picking it up.
When she went to the shop and found him sweeping the floor there. She called his name but he wouldn't even look at her.

"SHINICHI!!! WHY ARE YOU DOING TO ME?! FIRST YOU SAY THAT YOU CAN"T BE EXPOSE NOW YOUR IGNORING ME...SO RUDE!!!"She screamed. but she found him no answer.

"SHINICHI!!!"she said again.

SHinichi Sighed then he looked at her seriousley."Ran ...You don't get what I said dont you?'

"What?" Ran asked

"Ran..This is for your own good....IJust believe on me...you could get harmed now that I'm exposed...I'm sorry"he apologized.

"Sorry??? your saying sorry..and I leave you like you don't know who I am? Shinichi!!! say something!" She yelled expecting an answer from it. but she just found him going on the back door.to throw away the dirt.

"Shinichi!" She said As she followed him on the back.to her horror Shinichi just looked at her like she's someone he doesn't know."Yes what's the matter Ms. Mouri?"he answered.
Ran looked hurt for a while then she spoke again."Why are you doing this to me? why are you treating me like someone You just met? I've met you for my whole life and here you are ignoring me...You don't know the pain your giving me..You don't know how much I....I lo..."

"Ms.Mouri i'm just going outside there are costumers.Bye" He said. then he left ran in the room.Ran just laid herslef on the wall and sat...tears flowed from her eyes...her heart felt ripped apart....She just cried out there.

Shinichi hit the counter hard...He felt irritated om how he's life was.He couldn't take seeing the look on her face when he started to ignore her.If he wasn't being snotty he shouldn't have this body...well he shouldn't regret that on a time like this he laughed inside.

The day was over.Shinichi went ahead home before her.But before they would always walk home together.now he's all alone.he felt lonely for some reason.

Then the phone book rang. Shinichi answered it.and a voice said.
"Your Shinichi Kudo...well..well I should have guessed"

"Who are you?! TELL ME!!!" Shinichi/

"I didn't expect you to be alive when I gave you that pill."/Shinichi

"Who are you!!!" SHinichi/

"Were old aquiatances pal....Move and the girl behind you is dead.We got a sniper on board and if you take any action the girl dies." /Shinichi

Shinichi looked at his back and to his shock Ran was walking just behind him.

"No Not Ran please no....."Shinichi/

"Yes...She's the girl named Ran Mouri the daughter of Kogoro Mouri the clueless detective.your childhood friend."/Shinichi

"What do you want from me?! Leave her alone and that's our deal." Shinichi/

"We need to clear something guy.....You were that Kid on a company that had a deal with us ei? Haibara was the one who did that but we didn't expect she made the pill to rearange the dna to a little kid's."/Shinichi.

"Then what now?" shinichi/

"We want you to forget everything about the B.O. "/Shinichi

"Body odor or what?"Shinichi/

"I'm not kiddin here kid.If i get on my nerves she's dead."/Shinichi

"The black organization...do you really expect that i could let that go otu of my head? That's not it Buddy...I'll pretend I forget everything and you keep out on my family." Shinichi/

"I see...so your trying to keep with us ei...listen here kid...we want you dead.....But you seem to be very difficult to control...."

the he hang up..Shinichi knew that what he said was wrong..he should have cooperated.

TO BE CONTINUED.
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Conan~ Next on Truth over the years fanfic....."The Chaos arrives" When SHinichi faces the most wildest fears he had...losing everybody. stay tuned!!!

Ran ~ Conan you look like a crazy there talking all by yourself. stop that.

Conan~ whatever you said..heheh

[acedetectivefreya]

Chapter 20
"The Chaos arrives "

Shinichi woke up from his sleep.it was sunday today..the expiration date of his pill.well he couldn't even enjoy it with Ran.He sighed and thought of the man from the other day.

Shinichi strolled for a walk in the elementary school. it was lunch time.but he couldn't see Ayumi,Mitsuhiko or Genta. That's funny.every lunch time they used to hang on that big dingo tree.

He went a to Kogoro's apartment where is "O so great detective place is" But as he ranged the bell nobody answered.he just thought that Kogoro was asleep and Ran was away. so he decided to go away when he noticed that the dorrknob was destroyed.He was shocked then as he opened the door.the room was thrashed....everything was messed up.He was trembling in fear.he searched the house. but nobody was there.

He ran to Dr. Agasa's place and he saw it was thrashed too...he was scared the panic in him was growing stronger.he was wailing in agony as he was running to Sonoko's place.but her mother said she has been missing in her room since then.

He ran to ask Ayumi's mother where she had been.but she was also missing.so is Mitsuhiko and Genta's...He was shaking everybody was gone he went to call up Heiji. but he was gone too and the maid said that his room was utterly messed up and so is Kazuha was missing.

Shinichi was in an alley shaking to death.it was because of is carelesness.everybody was taken from him.His parents!!! They were arriving today by hotel!!! Shinichi went to the airport but he ddin't find his parents.he ran to every hotel possible but There was no names enlisting The Kudo couple.but as he passed his house his father came to him and grabbed him by the shoulders.

"Son!!! Your mother was kidnapped!!!" Yusaku shouted in fear.
"Mom!!!! where?" "
"Your mom disappeared on our hotel room....There was a letter informing they had taken her...I came here to look if she was here.but she wasn't Son we have to find her..I don't know how to live without your mother!!! SOn.....We have to find her..." Yusaku said

"Mom was taken also ?! Damn it were could have they taken her..." SHinichi said

The two of them went inside their mansion to search more.

Then a machine gun was targeted to Yusaku.thus Shinichi came to save his father.but he was too late Yusaku had also been taken by a man in a chopper. SHinichi was too late and was trying to save Yusaku but he was hit by a gun in the shoulder.He fell to the 1st floor and was unconscious.

He woke up crying.He felt the wet in his eyes so he wiped them away.He remembered everything that happened.in his head Ran's voice was the only thing he was thinking.he was imaggining that Ran was calling out for him. He was losing his head.He wasn't able to protect her on the time she needed him most. He walked on the streets emotionless.His eyes were trembling his hands were shaking.everything that was precious to him was gone.His friends his family and Ran.

Shinichi saw a man dresses in black.It was The man who gave him the pill.

Shinichi"Were did you put them!!!"
Gin"What do you mean?"
Shinichi"Were is Ran...My parents...My friends !!! I thought we agreed on this!!"

Gin"Your forgetting who I am.I don't make deals with you...I make the real thing."

Gin shot a gun on SHinichi.It hit his chest....But SHinichi didn't felt anything.instead he only felt something cold and he was knock out.

Vodka"He's asleep let's take him now"

Gin"Yeah...This is getting exciting."
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Conan~ Next on "Truth over the years" Shinichi reveals his own identity !!! Tune in!!!

Kogoro~ I don't know Ran what kid you brought here.I'm starting to think he's a mental patient.

Ran~ .........

Conan~"Chuckles" see you!!!

[rikuchan]

hahahah that's good!!
oh noes even shinichi was taken too!!
D: anyway can't wait to see who's gonna rescue him..
what about Kaitou

[acedetectivefreya]

Oh you'll see..Kaito has a very good ending here you see.....^^ He'll be a star here since his my my nt fav. after Shinichi-san

[acedetectivefreya]

This is the so made "ending" but I will still continue on the seires.

Chapter 21
"Fate decides"

Shinichi woke up dizzy ...he could see a little bit.but he doesn't feel good about it.He then saw clearly and he was on a dark room tied up .he saw Ran and all his friends that were abducted there.Tied up also.

Heiji"Your finally awake Kudo."
Shinichi"Heiji were are we?!"
Kazuha"We don't know...We were only taken when we were still asleep."

Shinichi "Ran?! where's Ran?"
Heiji"Don't worry she's there with your parents.Me and Kazuha are the likely ones awake.All of them are asleep.Shiho is also here."

Shinichi looked at Ai.He was so happy to see her since she was taken.SHinichi tried to move but he felt pain and yelped.

Heiji"Hey Kudo are you alright?"
SHinichi"Fine but Rrrggg...My chest it's feeling..."

"You must be feeling very pain in your chest.The bullet I shot you with had special chemicals designated to affect the muscles so you are completely paralized."A voice said.

"Tshhh" Heiji said.

"Hi ....I'm very pleased to have meet you again Mr.Shinichi with an alias of Conan Edogawa."

Shinichi"What are you talking about trash?"

"I'm sorry I'm not talking about trash.anyway I'm here to eplain everybody about something important.Wake them up."

Vodka Then woke everybody up.

Ran was crying in her sleep.she remembered how she was abducted.She saw Shinichi in the middle of the room laying there tied up in ropes.

"SHinichi!!!" Ran exclaimed.and Gin saw her and came near to her.

"You must be Ran Mouri...The daughter of the Queen of Law ,Eri Kisaki and This Kogoro Mouri.The c lueless detective"

Kogoro"You saty away from my daughter!!!"
Gin"You shut up your mouth" Gin kicked Kogoro's chest maing him out of breath.

"Daddy!!!" Ran said worrying her father..."How could you do this to us...Look at the kids. why do you have to get them."
Ran was reffering to Ayumi,Mitsuhiko and Genta who were crying their heads off since they were there.

Ayumi"hhhhhuuuuu..Mommy..I want my mOMMY!!!"
Vodka"Shut the f*** up kid...you don't want this bullet in your head." Wodka pointing a gun at her.

Shinichi"NO STOP. DON"T HURT AYUMI NOR MITSUHIKO AND GENTA!!!"

Gin just looked at Shinichi and stepped on his face.he pointed a gun on him and said."You don't have to worry about this boy....."

Ran"Shinichi!!!"

Then a woman came..she was dressed like official....She asked them to call her Vermouth. and she looked at SHinichi.

"Your the Shinichi boy.who interrupted our dealings. because of you our organizatuon is having a pretty hard time.well all of the people in here doesn't know that your lying ot them. especially that Girl. She doesn't have any idea of your other identity and how you were keeping thta secret. but that thing will be known to the world as of now."Vermouth said having a smirk on her cheeks.

SHinichi"You don't say....."

Ran was a bit confused right now what did she meant on Shinichi lyying to her? what does that mean.? I can't understand ..so she looked down and asked Shinichi...

Ran"Shinichi what is the meaning of what she said.that...that...your lying to me?! what does this mean? You leave me and left me alone.then you ignore me...the you put me into this mess?how dare you!!!"

Shinichi looked sad for a while and the kids stopped their crying....Ai looked away while the Hattori couple also looked down.Kogoro looked completely like an idiot.

Kogoro"Wait a sec....What are you trying to prove to us..."

"What I'm actually gonna unveil to you will be the shock of you lives......Dr.Agasa was the first to know Am I correct? There's no use on hiding Agasa..?'

Agasa just looked sad and on his head was full of repentance.

Yukiko cried and she saw that the gun was a bout to be shout."No...Please stop...DOn't kill our baby boy!!! "

Yusaku"You let our son go...."

"Oh this little runt?"Vermouth answered While taking SHinichi by the hair."It would be such a dismay to kill such a genius...and It's a shame to kill Shiho too..they are both plain geniuses.....So they end up at each other...They both need To be killed in the same time and the same way.Isn't that a bit harsh?"

Shinichi just fought against her grasp and looked at her as if he wanted to kill her, Vermouth was a bit scared but she just took her pace and walked away from him."You people don't know thta this man had made a sin to all of you....This SHinichi whiched you loved completely lied to all of you...especially to his sweetheart right there." "she looked at Ran in a very smiley way."She didn't even knew that the great Shinichi Kudo was actually with her all the time.in a miny little boy's body...."

Ran realized that it was Conan.and The kids reacted to it as well.
Genta said that how in the world that Shinichi was Conan?
"Simle boy......This Boy...your friend was snooting in out bussiness.and of course what we will do was to terminate every single witness.Gin hit him and made him unconscious.He gave him a pill that was expected to kill him..but it turned out to be a fraud. Ai that girk there. invented the thing.but she made it in a way we never thought. That APTX pill was made to rearrange the person's dna to a little kid's." "You may never realized that the day SHinichi was missing. Conan came instead.and without the shady eyeglasses You could easily determined it was him."

Ran was shokced.her eyes were trembling...all the memories with Conan was a fake...that was why he was sharp...her suspisions were correct.

Ayumi couldnt' believe her ears.....uncontrollably she shot back "HOW COULD HE BE CONAN.!!! PROVE TO US!!!"

"Oh you want prove?"Vermouth asked..she looked at Gin and Gin nodded he took a pill and gave it to SHinichi.who struggled but has taken the pill. then he was knockeed out.

everybody got worried but after a few minutes Vermouth's smile grew. SHinichi was under the spell of the pill. he began shouting in pain...the agony was in his muscles...his body was like burning..he couldn't breathe and he could have sworn he thought he was dying.

In Ran's horror...Shinichi's body turned into young Conan's..Kogoro has a mouthopened wide...while the Kid's shouted and Sonoko in a gasp.

Gin lifted Conan's shirt and took the eyeglasss in his pocket and he put the eyeglass on Conan's face.

Ran was shaking..all this time he was lying? he was toying with her...the pain in her chest was overpowering....tears fell and she regretted everything....she coudln't accept the fact that Conan was a great big Lie.and Shinichi was a big fat Liar.

"SHinichi NO BAKA!!!" she squealed....she cried and shook her head. she couldn;t forgive him for this.....

TO BE CONTINUED

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Conan~ OH NO RAN HATES ME!!! anyway next on "Truth Over the years" Dc Ova......a big Rescue sheck it out!!!

[acedetectivefreya]

Sorry guyzzz....but im still kinda urrrmmm planning the event so sorry...It's hrd 2 plan an ending that I don't have pretty much information about the characters U see...If you can can you tell me more about Bermouth and Kaito and Aoko more? also tequila if anyone can tell...how are they related to Shinichi?

[acedetectivefreya]

I mean Vermouth heheh wong type.

[acedetectivefreya]

Chapter 22
"KAito to the rescue?! "

Shinichi was sure he was going to die today.He was almost in tears when Vodka was threatening Ran's life. He couldn't do anything about it.He was murmuring something about his apology.and of course he repented to Ran everthing ,making her in pain like that.

Ran"You know Shinichi? right now I wanna kick your sorry loser's butt and punch your face as hard as I can.Dakedo[but] you don't know how much I care for you...nothing matters to me anymore but you."

Conan"Ran....I'm sorry....I don't have the right to speak to you right now."

Kogoro"Oh shut with the romance it's killin me"

Vermouth"Ooooohhhh.......I see I didn't notice that You had a sweetheart boy...it wouldn't hurt to play with her for a while won't it?"

Conan looked in horror as Gin cut the the cheek of ran by a knife.She shouted as she was hurt. Then Gin sliced her arm...only a cut.

Kogoro tried to kick Gin saying.."stay away from my daughter.!!!"

But he was only shut at the chest and Ran went to her father.
Ran"dad!! are you alright?"
Kogoro"Urrggg...It hurts but it's not that kind of worse"

Ran"How could you!!!"

Gin"Who cares eh was on the way?"

Conan"Why do you have to hurt them? kill me instead!!!"

Gin went to Conan and Kicked him until Conan was flying to the wall."Stop tapping...It'll be a shame to kill you by a gun there's no torture? we want to see the look of your face when they are all dead."

Yusaku"Touch him and....."

Vermouth"And what? you miracoulousey gp here and kill me? impossible.

Yukiko"Please....don't hurt our boy....."

Conan then Charged to Gin hit has hand and took the gun.he shot the rope then he pointed it to vermouth.
Conan"Move and she's dead"

Vermouth"Do you seriouslry think you'll kill me?"

Conan"Did I say I was kiddin?"

Vodka charged to Conan at the back but the kids made him fall. and Shinichi was hit on the leg.then Vodka hit him again in the other one.

Conan was in pain.but his gun was still pointed to Vermouth.he hit the trigger.then the wall exploded.A guy in a white tux was in there in a chopper. then on the doors.the SWAT came and all was pointing on the three men .Gin quickly took his gun and hit Conan on the back three times.

Ran came yto Conan in tears.Gin tried to hit one on her butshe kicked it aside.Gin was terribly scared when Ran was going nearer to him. she had this bad eyes that were telling him that he was a dead man if she came closer.She then kicked him on the face then took him and puched multiple times on his stomache then unbelievably SUPLEXED HIM.

All of them were like "WOW" but Vermouth had an escape pod and left Vodka.

The next day....Inpsector Megure couldn't believe that Kaito would go to them esking for some little help.then they hurried on to a building Kaito had been checkingout for months.it apppeared that they had planned them all along.Kaito didn't seem to care when they asked him how did he knew that the others were there.

BUT CONAN WAS DEAD MEAT...Ran was glaring at him for the past hour.

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acedetectivefreya said:

I mean Vermouth heheh wong type.

just modify the old post ..._damnit

[acedetectivefreya]

SOrryyy if I'm not "Perfect" it's just I'm a very very VERY lazy person to begin with...I don't like to modify. it just add another quick reply hahahha.

[acedetectivefreya]

Chapter 23
"YOUR DEAD MR.KUDO!!! "

The next morning Conan just woke.he saw that he was sleeping in the building were he had been taken.and everybody was awake. Ran was staring at him in a very scary manner.and everybody gave their attention to him.

I.M[Inspector Megure]"Our hero finally awakens.I still can't believe Kaito came to us.he said about something about you and the others.so we helped him out.I was about to thank him but he was gone in a flash...geezzz criminals this days..."

Kogoro"I can't believe the 17 yearold prodigy became this twirp."

Conan glared at Kogoro"Watch it Jerk now that I'm Shinichi I can talk back again....WOHOOO"

Ran"Oh no you bumblehead!!! YOU HAVE A LOT TO TELL ME YOU SHIT!!!"Ran picked Conan by the shirt and took him.Conan was pleading his father.but Yusaku wouldn't bulge. they came ot an abandoned building and after a few minutes everybody can hear his howling and yelling of pain and repentance.

Ran"SHINICHI DO YOU REMEBERED WHEN FATHER SOLVED THEIR REUNION?"

Conan"What Reunion what are you talking about hehe'

Ran"DON"T KID WITH ME !! IT"S DADIES HIGHSCHOOL REUNION!! WHEN YOU AND ME WERE TOGETHER IN THE BATH!!! YOU SHOULD HAVE GONE WHEN YOU KNEW THAT IT WAS BAD!!! YOU"VE SEEN MORE THAN YOU"LL EVER SEE!!!!THIS IS ATONEMENT!!!!"

Then Conan was almost crying then Ran hit him hard in the face his glasses broke.and he flew of the room making him hit out of the window.

Everybody had a sweatdrop expressions in their faces.Ran was just right there in her position holding her hand.

The next morning it was SHinichi walking.Dr.Agasa had made the antidote since he was shocked to hear his adopted daughter sHiho or Ai. was the one who made it.Shinichi was holding an ice in his cheek and everybody was looking at his swollen right eye.

Ran"Shinichi what is the calculation of a specific..."
Shinichi"Oh quit it Ran I'm studying already."
Ran"I'm only helping you out you know.and how many months have you been in teh elementary department.you have a lot of work to pass the 2nd year exams.and you will not have any summer vacations since you'll use that time to make up the days you've missed."

SHinichi"Hayzzz this is hard"

Then Shinichi saw the three kidz he befriended with. He ran up to Ayumi .....
Shinichi"Hi Ayumi what's shaking?"
Ayumi looked at him for a while and her smile sadden."Oh Hi CO...I mean SHinichi..."
The three of them just looked down on the floor.
Shinichi sighed.he knew it would end up like this."Oh come on Ayumi.I'm still Conan inside.....Your still my friends look..."

Shinichi took an eyeglass out of his pocket and he wore it.Ayumi could see Conan from him.he face lightened and she said "Yes"

Ran smiled as SHe saw this of course she was happy for the both of them.she knew her trials are over.but there is till one.....It;s when she decides to tell him how she really feels.
TO BE CONTINUED

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acedetectivefreya said:

SOrryyy if I'm not "Perfect" it's just I'm a very very VERY lazy person to begin with...I don't like to modify. it just add another quick reply hahahha.

yea, but that's a spam...and in this forum is not for spaming

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Chapter 14
"I'm not going to be a detective for now...I just want to be a man right now. "

This day was the Osochita Shrine festival. were at night couples are supposed to kiss at the midnight's full moon. legends say that if a couple did what was asked.they would be together forever.

Yusaku and Yukiko was with their son all the time at the house. it was anormal family day ...Yusaku was on the table.drinking coffee and reading the newspaper.while Yukiko makes some luch for Shinichi. while SHinichi was waisting his time staring at the Cherry trees on their backyard.

Yukiko was taking a peek at his son. she was looking if he had an intention to go to the festival.
"Look's like as if he doesn't even care .....that boy...."She thought.having a black shade uder her forehead.
Yukiko"Shinichi,dear....you don't want to go to the festival this night?"

Shinichi"naah...What a waste of my precious detective and student life...with all my work here..i bet you don't want to be me."

Yusaku"Oh I wouldn't bet you on that son...." Yusaku ran to Shinichi whisperring on his ear."You know..when your mom and I were a couple.we came to that festival and made a kiss...that's why she's still mine BWAHAHAHAHAH....."

Shinichi"Well.....I bet tootin' right on that yeah...wait....[thunder strikes on head] what if....heheheh [sparks on teh eyes]."

Shinichi"I've change my mind....maybe this festival is quite interesting..nyeheheh...nyahahah..BWAHAHAHHA"

Yukiko just sighed and said "SO much for them being unalike."

Shinichi said his bye's and went to school...using almost all the hours in studyng....well this day's maybe special at all.
after the day..Shinichi changed clothes and went to Ran's home.He just stunned at her when he saw her wearing a white Kmono with details of a beautiful crimson butterfly and other nice stuffs...he blushed red and stared at her. Ran noticing the attention.she just took Shinichi's hand and lead him away from her sarcastically wine stinking home and went to the Osochita Shrine.

Shinichi was having a break when her smooth hand was in his....he felt so warm..and as he was daydreaming about her being his wife.Ran immediatley puched him in the face.....but she always wanted to get those lips from him....she wanted to make it come true.since she loves Him...

They came to alot of games ..well Ran almost won most of them but naaahh who cares SHinichi always blurts out when he's beaten.Shinichi saw a necklase Ran was always staring at ...It was a sterling silver ruby necklase for 4000Y....he knew she couldn't affort it and so did he. but in a flash.he saw somewhat like his parents dashing to buy the Ruby necklase. Ran got dissapointed.but Yukiko pulled her son out of the crowd and gave him the Necklase.

Yukiko"Here son give it to her and I know you'll get your first kiss.and I have the camera to record all of the little details!!!"

Yusaku"FULL SUPPORT!!!"

Shinichi blushed do hard he scolded his parents for being perverted.then he went to Ran and gave her it.

He juct opened her hands and let it fall in her palms...Ran looked at Shinichi.but found him looking at the other side he blunted .

SHinichi"Here..I know you want it.It's agift for you from me."
Ran"SHin-kun.....your not romantic."
Shinichi}Ugghh[falss on the floor]...I'm not rying to be romantic here Ran!!!"

"Liar!!!"Yukiko shouted form afar...."why did you buy that then?"

SHinichi just pulled ran to the top of the Osochita Shrine..were couples ussually kiss!!!! they sat on the stone chair.and gaze on the beautiful field around then. Ran just stretched her hands and placed it in Shinichi hands.

Shinichi then took Ran bu the shoulder and eye to eye.he looked at her sincerely....Ran was just wide eyed that time...
"I can't hide it anylonger..."he started...."I know I'm not the one your looking for but...Ran your the girl I;ve been crazy for...I've been inlove with you ever since we were kids...I know I seem weird but..I just can't hide what I've felt for the one I care the most.

"Let me say it one more time..the words I keep inside...."


Shinichi"I confess...I love you Ran....


"this heart of mine has something to reveal..."


SHinichi"Your the girl I;ve been dreaming for....


"that your always in my prayers.and this time to you I swear."


Shinichi"Ran....Do you love me back?"

"there's nothing I won't do for you? I care....."

Ran just wide opened place her arms around his neck..in tears she placed her lips around his.Shinichi held her closer to him..as they felt each other for the night....

YUKIKO on the other hand was having the gr8test time of her life...
"I;m going to be a grandmommy!!! yey!!! but...It's considering I;m old..."

Yusaku "Do you really have to record it..don't you want it to be private.?"

Shinichi took her away....the he asked her....
"Will you accpet me Ran?"

Ran just brushed away the tears.."Baka...of course I do..OI love you with all that I am...."

TO BE CONTINUED

[acedetectivefreya]

Chapter 25
"Being a boyfriend is hell"

The next morning all you can hear in the Kogoro Agency artment was chatting an squirming.Ran had been talking with Sonoko and Kazuha pver the phone.They had been screaming like mice for over 4 hours straight. both of them were blushing as they hear Ran was telling the story of How Shinichi court her.

Sonoko"I didn't know Mr.Detective was Romantic."
Kazuha"I wish that's the way how Heiji asked me but it was less romantic."

Ran"I thennn...Kissed him in the lips..and it was my first time...it was...."

Sonoko/Kazuha"It was?"

Ran"It was..."

Sonoko/Kazuha "It was?"

Ran"It was so....nice....I didn't know he was a good kisser..It was so satisfying...I mean"

Sonoko"What a speech...hmmm.....I don't feel staisfied when my guy kisses me.."

Kazuha"Jealoussyyy..."

Ran.."Oh my GOSH!!! I just remebere..we have a date today!!! Call you gUrlfriends l8ter!!!"

Ran then wore a white Halter top with a checkered stripe..Maroon orange,yellow design.

Then She wore Sneakers and neat put a scarf around her neck.

SHe strolled her way while guys were busy putting their eyes on her. She then doorbelled at SHinichi's door.and He went out wearing.a round neck shirt.and with a white sweaters inside.and a Khaki pants to top of with his red striped Sneakers. He then put his arm aorund Ran's neck and smiled to her.

Shinichi"Just to tell other boys that your spoken for."He grinned.He also looked at Ran and Blushed so hard since she looked so pretty today.Not conservative as it used to.

Ran just smiled back...

They walked their way on the mall. while the both of them was cuddling each other in a love seat. Shinichi nuzzled his nose on to her nose. and they were laughin their butt off.They stood and went their way in a restaurant.Other cuples was just blabbering that the Famous Shinichi Kudo was with a girl and obviousely Holding her hand in the table...people outside looked as the couple had the time of their life.

Then Shopping time. SHinichi got tired of pulling out money in his wallet.He gave Ran his wallet instead she wanted to buy some more.He was having some cramps on tons of boxes and plastic bags aroung his hands.He was gasping out breath.

5 years Later......
Ran with her long hair tied in a bunned was walking in the hallways.She had afigure of a model.Very sophisticated and attractive. She was wearing a grey Uniform with Shoes of a Nine west black stilettos.and wearing a Guess cropped Bag.SHe had been wearing Sunglasses.As she walk the employees was bowing at her. She bowed back and went to her move.

She then went into an office. She took her coat off puuting it in the rack.Then she took her sunglasses off.she took her bun away and let her hair loose. She went to a man who was sitting in an arm chair and sat on His lap.Her voiced Trailed off. She then kissed him in the cheek."Hi sweetie how's work?" She said.sounding a bit more matured."Oh nice how about your shot today ?"the voice asked."Oh Easy..."

The man was extremely handsome...with his bangs and everything.he had sharp eyes that made him look like a hunk.and he was wearing a black tux with a skyblue bowtie.He then asked if she was excited about the day?

tRan"Ow Shinichi-kun...You know I just turned 23...and I'm so excited tomorrow..I just visited you to see if you were fine."

SHinichi just smirked and looked out side his wide glass panel wall that overlooked the whole City...Now he was the Owner of a very succesful company while being a High pledge inspector. He had growned quite well now.More taller and masculine.While Ran turned into a so damn sexy Superstar.They were getting married tomorrow.That's why she came to see her sweetheart.

Inspector Megure was under Shinichi's power.and Kogoro was normal as ever.Ginta and the others were ready for the mids.Heiji and Kazuha already got married earlier and had a baby girl who just turned 2 this year.Kaito never heard of them since. But Ran heard that Aoko gave birth to twins.probably his kids Shinichi guessed.

Ai had met a man who became her lover.Well since then she became a very lovable person.Knowing She was happy.Shinichi was quite relieved.His parents came today for their wedding.
and Dr.Agasa bcame 65 this year."How time flies..."SHinichi blurtes out."Ran just looked at her man"Yeah.....It has been a hard time isn't it.?"
TO BE CONTINUED